July 1, 2009

BLINDNESS - An Acrostic

Been deceived by God in birth
Lonely I was till my soul saw you
It is through your eyes
Night that lasted long came to an end
Destined I was to see
Nature, smiles and happiness
Every moment I am reminded
Seeing is believing
Seeing through my own, or yours!

10 comments:

Leo said...

Dop is back with a bang!!
just a wonderful acrostic...
a bit sad, yet beautiful...


the last two lines form the essence of this masterpiece... and u got it just right! well done!

Aarthi said...

@ Vinu,

Yayyyyy! ;) ;)

Thank you!! Yayss!

I was so skeptic about the last line... :)
Glad to know that this has come out well!

roshwrites said...

I love this Aarthi =D You are such a good poet :)

freelancer said...

i loved the pic....lol...the acro too...gal yu r gud....liked the pic tooooooo

Arun Kumar said...

Superb acrostic...
As leo said..back with a bang...
I loved the fourth line... very much...

Pretty Me!! said...

well written ! :)

Aarthi said...

@ Rosh,

Really glad! :) And congrats on your 50th!

Aarthi said...

@ Grasshopper,

Thanks! :P

Aarthi said...

@ Arun,

Thanks bro! :)

Aarthi said...

@ Prats,

*Bows down with reverence*

Thanks! :)