August 7, 2009

P.A.I.N


Purged emotions leading to redemption

And all other feelings now start to sink

In you I now find my true happiness

Nothing more I yearn for, just you my love


Hey guys,


This is an Acrostic Decasyllable Quatrain...an acrostic that has 4 lines containing 10 syllables each. Vinu taught me this. He says that am a good student who has learnt two forms of poetry in one single day! :D :D


Thanks Vinu... its because of a great teacher like you! :) Thanks for curing my writer's block! :)

16 comments:

Leo said...
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Leo said...

yep, u r good shtudent! :D

glad to have taught u this form! good choice of words too! loved it! :)

see ya next lesson shtudent! ;)

Aarthi said...

@ Vinu,

Sure teacher! :D :D

Arun Kumar said...

wowie.... look who is a happy teacher now...
beautiful acro artz...

Sowmi said...

and this is another cute acrostic... I think you're gonna become one big expert in the field of acrostic.. can you teach me too pulussssssseeee????

SHWETHA said...

Far across ya fame spreads dudie....
You are a very good friend!
Aarthi its a very god post. liked da words uve used appropriately :)

Aarthi said...

@ Arun,

Ishtop!! :P

I'm already blushing! :D :D

Aarthi said...

@ Sowmi,

Expert aa? Too much aa theriyala unnakku? :P

Thanks da... yep, we can conjure some acrostics together! :D

Aarthi said...

@ Shwetha,

Heyy, welcome to my blog! :)

My fame spreads? Good friend? err... :)

Thank you for your comment! :D

paramveer said...

fantastic learner!!!!

~PrIncEsS nUcHu~ said...

Wow!! Simply nice:)))

Shravan | ശ്രവണ്‍ said...

thought i left one comment already.. :( and wow, nice selection of words. wondering about me learning some of those words :(( too good :) cheerss

Arv said...

wow... if ever one enjoys the 'pain' so much, it must be through words like these....

lovely :)

ani_aset said...

lovely poem arthi :)
the picture and poem are poles apart why? :)

ghostrider said...

nice

ghostrider said...

nice