August 7, 2009

Me & You...My First Haiku! :D

My heart hums a tune
I gaze at your face and sky
And it starts to rain

P.S.: This is my first haiku!! :D Am so excited!! All the credit goes to my dear friend Vinu aka Leo... :) Thanks for teaching me! :D

10 comments:

Leo said...

no no... 99% credit goes to u :D
u conjured the words Dop! :)

pleasure teaching u! wanna write another one now itself? ;)

nice pic... :D :D

Arun Kumar said...

Cute haiku... Lovely..
I wanna write one to... will do it by this week end..

Aarthi said...

@ Vinu,

Being modest eh? ;)

Yup sure... :)

Aarthi said...

@ Arun,

Cute, innit? ;)

Thanksie... do try! :D :D

Sowmi said...

Very very chuweet :) loved it Artz :)

mysterious gal said...

wow this was amazing ....now i need to show a stick to Vinay to teach me too ....as my writers block is setting in too :P ....please teacher :P

This was beautiful and the most amazing haiku i have read ...loved it :)

~PrIncEsS nUcHu~ said...

Tempting!! I think I will try one too:D

Arv said...

Oh... I know that rain so well...

like it too :P

ani_aset said...

ok enough
what is a HAIKU :)?

RINZU RAJAN said...

NICE USAGE OF WORDS... BUT TECHNICALLY THIS IS NOT A HAIKU... A HAIKU TALKS OF NATURE ALL THE TIME...IT CAN BE CALLED A SENRYU THAT IS A HUMAN HAIKU WRITTEN FOR HUMAN EMOTIONS,BUT HERE IN IT DOESN'T EVEN QUALIFY FOR THAT...


YOU CAN KNOW MORE ABOUT THE HAIKU AND SENRYU BY VISITING www.shadowpoetry.com

DON'T RELY ON PEOPLE TO LEARN POETRY...LEARN IT URSELF... IT WILL HELP U IMPROVE...