July 29, 2009

I miss you, do you?

I knew it would never be easy
Easy not to think about you
You gave me the reason to believe
Believe in the truth and in you


You always said the truth
Truth that I would be missed
Missed when I am gone
Gone to where I was from


From that day I am waiting
Waiting to hear from you
You are the one I am longing for
For you is to where I belong…
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26 comments:

freelancer said...

aw..this is nice

err..
From that day I am waiting
Waiting to hear from you
You are the one I am longing for
For you is to where I belong…

hu exactly are yu waiting for??
hope its not grassy

Arv said...

touche..

lol @ FL

mysterious gal said...

wow u left me speechless girl
the perfect miss you loop poem i have ever read...amazing is all i can say to this :)

ani_aset said...

"You are the one I am longing for
For you is to where I belong…"

Lovely lines arthi :)

Rane (The Orchid is Now More Than Just Pink) said...

awwwwweeeeee sherni.. beautiful.. :D

and and and I am back.. :)

Cheers
Kajal

Anurag said...

This is prolly my first look at a loop poem ....Nicely written aarthi ..may be I too should give it a try :)

Sowmi said...

Hey thats a sweet poem :) Loved it Artz:)

Arun Kumar said...

Beautiful ...
I luv looped poems with long lines...
Loved this...

ViDiShA said...

...vry nice dear..

purPLE haZE !! said...

Thats a nice loop :))

very simple and warm !!

chirag said...

that nice
yaar
something very ineresting
i vl try it in hindi poem also

kasabiangirl said...

Nice poem...loved reading it!

Aarthi said...

@ FL,

Nah, do you think so? :P

Aarthi said...

@ Arv,

Thanksie! :)

Aarthi said...

@ Nabila,

Awweee... is it?

Thanks a lot girl! :)

Aarthi said...

@ Ani_aset,

Thanks! And welcome! :D

Aarthi said...

@ Kaju,

Ao maharani...badi jaldi aa gayi tum! :P

Aarthi said...

@ Anurag,

Waiting to read yours! :)

Aarthi said...

@ Sowmi,

Thanks da! *Hugs*

Aarthi said...

@ Arun,

Thank you sir! :)

Aarthi said...

@ Vidisha,

Thank you girlie! :)

Aarthi said...

@ Hashan da,

Thank you! :D :D
Glad to see you here! :)

Aarthi said...

@ Chirag,

Thank youu jii...

Zaroor try kariyega! :D

Aarthi said...

@ Kasabiangirl,

Thank you ma'm... Hope you enjoyed it! :D

~PrIncEsS nUcHu~ said...

Oh my gosh!!!!!!!! SOooooooo Nice!

Aarthi said...

@ Nuchu,

Thanks di! :D