June 10, 2009

RELATIONSHIP (Acrostic)

Rare but pure
Empty never, always full
Love it gives
Astonished it leaves you
Tough at times
Immense protection it gives
On your hand it rests, fragile
Needs to be taken care of
Sometimes painful
Holds you by your arm
It carries you through the storm
Precious of all


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10 comments:

Leo said...

i liked it dop.

nice description of a relationship with both the joy and the sadness there. :)

felt the fourth line can be a bit better..

beautiful acro. :)

Aarthi said...

Thanks for the honest comment Vinay...

I get to learn with such comments...

Will improve... :)

Chriz said...

and you are specialising in acristic stuff these days.. mmm.. yusss good aarthi..

Satans Darling™ said...

Nice acrostic, but you can do better :)

Sowmi said...

Beautiful again... I loved it and enjoyed it and How true it is...

Pretty Me!! said...

it certainly could be better.. but i was still ah so touched with the last line... wish it was so always !

Arjun said...

It was sweet..!! :)

This acrostic thing is itself such a creative aspect..

Keep writing ...

Cheers..!!
Arjun

BlossomBlue said...

Nice one dear.. It completely defines what relationship is.. Simple words made it even more beautiful !

parzi said...

hieee..
honestly i did not knw what an acrostic was...thanks to ur beautiful post i know it...n its awesome..defining wat a realtionship actually is made up of in such a few words is commendable...
loved it!

Arun Kumar said...

Nice one artie...
lovely... u r getting good in acros...
but i felt there was some loss of continuity between the lines 5 n 6.... may be its just me...