Confusion overpowers my sensesRough patches ahead
Oblivious of my surroundings
Smiles beginning to fade
Should I stop thinking about you
Rantings of my brain
Of all I can say today
All my smiles have lost the lustre
Do you still love me
Still I await an answer
P.S.: My first acrostic... I promise to get better with every acrostic I try.
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Edited at 16.06.2009 -
Guys, this post has won the BWA Honorable Mentions Award at Amias' blog! :)
This is the first big recognition I have received for my poetry! Thanks a lot!
11 comments:
me first!!
(i hope!)
acrostic is very nice Dop!
u might give me a complex soon! ;)
no wonder I call u Dop!
very good first try on an Acro!
who's the question for? :)
Hey Aarti :) I loved it... simple, beautiful, meaningful, awesome and fantabulous ACROSTIC
Cheers,
Let your confusions get cleared soon by the answer :)
Nice one...
First acrostic...cud have begun on a happy note :-) ... anyways ...congrats on that... n keep goin...
what was the answer?
is he a hot guy?
nice one
i vl try this
wow... "crossroads"... some topic that is.. !! lovely acrostic.. must say... ! especially the first four lines.. realy nice!!
I like this. The first four lines speaks volume.
First one n u did it well.. Sweet one..
No words for this..!! The best of all the three...
Feelings dipping away.... :)
lovely write...
Clear ur confusions arii .. ;)
Cheers..!!
Arjun
Congratulations! You won Acrostic Only BWA Honorable Mentions.
i loved this one:) u ve got a nice blog:) esp the diary template:)
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