Pragmatic Utopia: I miss you, do you?

July 29, 2009

I miss you, do you?

I knew it would never be easy
Easy not to think about you
You gave me the reason to believe
Believe in the truth and in you

You always said the truth
Truth that I would be missed
Missed when I am gone
Gone to where I was from

From that day I am waiting
Waiting to hear from you
You are the one I am longing for
For you is to where I belong…

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26 comments:

Freelancer said...: aw..this is nice

err..
From that day I am waiting
Waiting to hear from you
You are the one I am longing for
For you is to where I belong…

hu exactly are yu waiting for??
hope its not grassy; July 29, 2009 at 4:19 PM
Arv said...: touche..

lol @ FL; July 29, 2009 at 4:27 PM
mysterious gal said...: wow u left me speechless girl
the perfect miss you loop poem i have ever read...amazing is all i can say to this :); July 29, 2009 at 4:44 PM
ani_aset said...: "You are the one I am longing for
For you is to where I belong…"

Lovely lines arthi :); July 29, 2009 at 4:48 PM
Naina said...: awwwwweeeeee sherni.. beautiful.. :D

and and and I am back.. :)

Cheers
Kajal; July 29, 2009 at 5:38 PM
Anurag said...: This is prolly my first look at a loop poem ....Nicely written aarthi ..may be I too should give it a try :); July 29, 2009 at 7:49 PM
Meow said...: Hey thats a sweet poem :) Loved it Artz:); July 29, 2009 at 9:20 PM
Arun Kumar said...: Beautiful ...
I luv looped poems with long lines...
Loved this...; July 29, 2009 at 10:14 PM
ViDiShA said...: ...vry nice dear..; July 30, 2009 at 12:03 AM
hasHAN hazaRIKA said...: Thats a nice loop :))

very simple and warm !!; July 30, 2009 at 8:29 AM
Anonymous said...: that nice
yaar
something very ineresting
i vl try it in hindi poem also; July 30, 2009 at 9:48 AM
Anonymous said...: Nice poem...loved reading it!; July 30, 2009 at 1:10 PM
Nyx said...: @ FL,

Nah, do you think so? :P; July 30, 2009 at 3:47 PM
Nyx said...: @ Arv,

Thanksie! :); July 30, 2009 at 3:47 PM
Nyx said...: @ Nabila,

Awweee... is it?

Thanks a lot girl! :); July 30, 2009 at 3:47 PM
Nyx said...: @ Ani_aset,

Thanks! And welcome! :D; July 30, 2009 at 3:48 PM
Nyx said...: @ Kaju,

Ao maharani...badi jaldi aa gayi tum! :P; July 30, 2009 at 3:48 PM
Nyx said...: @ Anurag,

Waiting to read yours! :); July 30, 2009 at 3:49 PM
Nyx said...: @ Sowmi,

Thanks da! *Hugs*; July 30, 2009 at 3:53 PM
Nyx said...: @ Arun,

Thank you sir! :); July 30, 2009 at 3:55 PM
Nyx said...: @ Vidisha,

Thank you girlie! :); July 30, 2009 at 3:57 PM
Nyx said...: @ Hashan da,

Thank you! :D :D
Glad to see you here! :); July 30, 2009 at 4:00 PM
Nyx said...: @ Chirag,

Thank youu jii...

Zaroor try kariyega! :D; July 30, 2009 at 4:01 PM
Nyx said...: @ Kasabiangirl,

Thank you ma'm... Hope you enjoyed it! :D; July 30, 2009 at 4:02 PM
Anonymous said...: Oh my gosh!!!!!!!! SOooooooo Nice!; July 31, 2009 at 2:03 PM
Nyx said...: @ Nuchu,

Thanks di! :D; July 31, 2009 at 2:14 PM