Been deceived by God in birthLonely I was till my soul saw you
It is through your eyes
Night that lasted long came to an end
Destined I was to see
Nature, smiles and happiness
Every moment I am reminded
Seeing is believing
Seeing through my own, or yours!
10 comments:
Dop is back with a bang!!
just a wonderful acrostic...
a bit sad, yet beautiful...
the last two lines form the essence of this masterpiece... and u got it just right! well done!
@ Vinu,
Yayyyyy! ;) ;)
Thank you!! Yayss!
I was so skeptic about the last line... :)
Glad to know that this has come out well!
I love this Aarthi =D You are such a good poet :)
i loved the pic....lol...the acro too...gal yu r gud....liked the pic tooooooo
Superb acrostic...
As leo said..back with a bang...
I loved the fourth line... very much...
well written ! :)
@ Rosh,
Really glad! :) And congrats on your 50th!
@ Grasshopper,
Thanks! :P
@ Arun,
Thanks bro! :)
@ Prats,
*Bows down with reverence*
Thanks! :)
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