Three years back
Just three years back
You turned away from Me
And I couldn't call you back!
My soul in anguish
My dreams you shattered
You turned away from Me
As if I never mattered!
I ran away from home
It is my wedding tonight
I can see you, feel you and speak to you
They say I am not alright!
I know you still exist
I am not wrong
They call me insane
But to you I belong!
I've run a long way to find you
A long way tonight
And to be one with you
Is going to be my last rite!
In the midst of this starry paradise
I gaze at the sky
I see you looking at me
And you winked thrice!
I finally saw you tonight
To prove to everyone that I am right
That our love is true
And I finally saw you! :)
P.S. : Thank you for choosing the picture for me and inspiring and motivating me to try my hand at poetry dear Vinay.
12 comments:
OMG..OMG..OMG..!! How good that was...
So sweet n so full of feelings... :)
Aarthi.... very nice da.... ;) ... U have it in u for writing poems.. Gr8 :)
Cheers..!!
Arjun
yup..sweet it was aarthi!!
loved d 2nd, 4th n 5th para d most.. :)
fan is rite..u hav it in u....keep goin da........ :)
@ Arjun,
Ya ya! OMG I have it in me! :P
Thanx da...
Cheers
*PEACE*
@ Pri,
Thanks da... :)
Me too love those stanzas...shame to shame! Hehe!
Cheers
*PEACE*
that was ver good
aarthi
and it made me your fan
and another thing
whom you saw again
Hey Chirag,
I'm glad you liked it!
And fan...is it? Thank you! :)
Cheers
*PEACE*
wow wow wow! :)
so beautiful poetry! hidden all this while!
super artz! this is sooo musical too! a song in a poem! super! :)
i'm sure u will write better poems....one day
dnt knw why....it felt to me a bit childish.........nice try
lovely.. write more of these.. you can create a mark in this genre
chriz
this one is sooo sweet !!!!
Thanx Pratsie :)
*HUGS*
ur the Dop! :) perhaps not as good as the previous two, but still a darling :D
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